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Chap 2
Hey Roxas you up for a little duel with the new kid Larxene brought in," Xion said.
"Hell yhea that is if its alright with Xemnas," Roxas said.
"What the hell that can be his test if he wins he's in if not thats Larxene's job to take care of him," Xemnas replied.
"why the hell are you always putting me to work" I said.
"Relax chica he don't look so bad" he said grinning at Roxas.
"just be ready because i'm gonna knock that bad-ass look off your face in no time" Roxas said in face glaring. Roxas created a dark corridor to the training area I had to make one for him because he couldn't. We went through and Xemnas stopped us before he went down "we cant just have you running around with out a name he" said 'AJON' in front of him that must have been his name and every one in the room could see it now i heard Roxas hold in a laugh. then the letters started to spin like it did with everyone an 'X' appeared in front of him and the letters fell into place 'JAXON' it read
"this will determine if you are worthy of wearing our coat now fight Roxas".  Xemnas said to him. Jaxon then jumped down from the platform onto the field. They both summoned their key blades Roxas summoned Oblivion while Jaxon summoned his blade but it was different where the crown should have been he had a three pointed star with a crescent moon next to it. And where the skulls should have been there were two spirals one red one blue then they just kind of went at it clashing blades for about a couple of minutes. "Come on Jaxon you got this," i heard Demyx say wonder why he cared so much if the kid won probably because then he could have some one to play music with. then i noticed Roxas had a worried look on his face then i realized why Jaxon was throwing his weight into every strike he made soon it was too much for Roxas and he collapsed. "what was that about knocking that bad ass look of my face" he said triumphantly.
chap two's a shorty feel free to give some ideas
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:iconakatorg13:
So is this your own OC? If it is he is awsome!
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Darkmaster58 Oct 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you
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Kit-Kat-Tik-Tak Dec 29, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Haha Roxas got Pwned!!
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Darkmaster58 Dec 29, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
yhea he did i wish i could find someone who's not busy and looking for something to draw and make this in manga form
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Kit-Kat-Tik-Tak Dec 29, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I would but I draw...terribly.
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Darkmaster58 Dec 29, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
well its better than what i draw
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Kit-Kat-Tik-Tak Dec 29, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You wanna bet?
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Darkmaster58 Dec 29, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
the picture of my OC is my best work
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Kit-Kat-Tik-Tak Dec 29, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I draw (when I draw) it's mostly chibi, I couldn't draw a normal person even if I wanted too
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Darkmaster58 Dec 29, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
i see your point
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